Hilarious! I didn't think that was coming either!
Hmmm first few seconds were good. In the middle somewhere I lost my fear. Maybe more bass in your voice or something more dark sounding?
It's perfect like it is.
Bravo! Bravo! I love the echoing in your voice sync-definitely depicts shadows moving around me. I like that the poem is short and sweet-I had to listen to it twice...and I want to listen to it again and again. Look for my next collage-yours will be in it!
I am very glad you enjoyed it :)
Be sure to PM me the outcome of your work. Ill be happy to check it out!
Very well done. Good voice. However, read it slower and more enthusiastic-you might wow people a little bit more!
I don't think it's supposed to be "Enthusiastic"
nice. Definitely sounds like a track from a Tim Burton film I wasn't sure at first, but I thought that it was going to be a robot singing.
Perfect minecraft trailer because of the metal clings in the beginning. I might use this for my game!
I have a few constructive criticisms myself on this one. First, the sub you made in the beginning and very end....needs to be cut out-it makes an awkward appearance. Secondly, I think that some bass horns would have given this song much more suspense and intensity. Thirdly, the drums were not loud enough...at all : / And as lannelllkj has put it, it got a little irritating just to hear the horns-that is agreed. It is a strong song and idea, but needs much attention and work...Then I can play it in my car on the way to work in a blizzard : )
Actually listening to it months after I made it I am realizing the exact same thing I will do a fix and re-post this.
thnx for the criticism
You got my foot tapping!
I think my favorite part of this song was the flare of the trombone and/or tubas in my left speaker. This is a strong song, and I gave it a .058 boost : ) I hope it gets you somewhere! lol
Thank You :D
really weak. Work on this one!
the redone ver. is almost complete
it sounds more like a trailer for a zombie movie now though lol
Just listened to your teaser trailer, and was hoping to find something more, and here it is! Ended a little too short : / as far as the song ending part. Might want to crop that out.
Thnx I kinda felt the felt the same way but
I said w/e...POST
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