Lord1Mauler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Soar Away]

Bad ending, otherwise, awesome

I think the ending was bad because it didn't end on a stiff, solid note. It ended with a ring, and the ring never quite discontinued. GJ, I will consider it for my flash!

[Sonic2BossThemeRemake-MJ]

ok..

lame ending, rest ok.

Metaljonus responds:

Ur mum.

[Flow Part 3: Beginnings]

More of that...

More acoustic that you added in the ending-I liked it, the rest of the song could have used it. Gj.

pcexpert12 responds:

Thanks, I'll see what I can do in my new songs.

[SR - Tale One]

Very peaceful but...

Take out that part where it sounds like you're hitting a small piece of metal. It doesn't sound like it's part of the song because it doesn't sound in rhythm/beat. Otherwise this is very well done!

[Beyond the Beat]

Yep-not too shabby

Use smoother transitions, sounds like you're starting a new song at the 1 minute range. I would add more bass to it-sounds a bit too much in the high pitch. Definitely beyond the beat, and not too repetitive-which is good.

[FlStudiobeat76]

Way too repetitive, beat not steady...

This piece sounds like it was done in half an hour. Ya gotta put time into it like any other piece of work. I couldn't find a beat to your work-that's not good because it sounds like an amateur did it. For whatever program you are using, try putting on a "Metronome" to the speed you want. This will help you in the long run to keep your beat steady.

The whole thing is too repetitive. Try to introduce another instrument or add a solo somewhere in the middle of your work. Your intro and outro should sound alike. Right now it's beyond boring, and hard to listen to without muting it. BJ-Bad Job, try harder next time. 1/10

[Don't Blink]

good voice, keep using it

This is good... Really good. Sound FX worx with your music, because it's scary. Your voice is clear, the recording is smooth-no crackling, my ears aren't bleeding, god.. this is just awesome. I'm adding this to my fav's.

I think you should stick with your voice because many audio's don't have a voice, and when they do, it sux. You got a good voice, don't give it up. I'm doing a flash right now I will consider this piece. 10/10 all my 5 belong to this piece!

Crosswinds responds:

thanks, dude! you have no idea how good that makes me feel right now!

[OMG Jesus Christ is dead!]

Change the title, and add something more...

This has nothing to do with the Crucification of Jesus Christ. I hear no words that relate to it. The song seems really disappointing, like a big loop... but it's not. I don't know if you picked a title out of hat for this piece, but it just doesn't work. I could imagine it took you SOME time to create this lovely thing-a-ma-jig, but it really needs some spicing up. Add some words, add a solo of some sort, and fix the damn title. Only then will you get a 10/10.

TheAcidMaker responds:

Oh, that's just a random title.

[Nemesis.]

Holy shizzle nit!

Hey this is pretty kick butt! The lyrics are freakin freaky, but I like it lol. This would be a great song for a fighting scene in anybody's flash. I would kick up the guitar solo at the end a little bit more, but otherwise, the beat is steady, the bass is there, and originality is a big plus.

Want the 10? scream some more-like you mean it. Maybe you already are, but I'm not convinced. Like when you do the chorus at the end of the lines you say "you." Instead of saying U like a proper english person, try to go outside the boundaries a lil bit. Ex: YOW!!!! The oo in you sounds kind of "nice." I think the genre you're performing in here is more "evil."

GJ. 9/10

Schleif responds:

haha, thanks man! my pronunsation can probably be blamed on my nativity. as a swede, i might not sound perfect. or rather, not appropriate. but i'll keep working on it for sure! thanks for the great review man!

[Introductory Fanfare]

Dandy.

I'm voting an 8 because I think it could use a tad more spice to it. Maybe some trumpets? The French horn is a good bass line. I like the medieval characteristic it carries-just as you said it does-kings or royalty. If you want the 10/10, add at least 2 more instruments.

GJ.

Lightningpichu responds:

Yea ok :P There are trumpets in this btw they just arent as important as the other imstruments.