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Doesn't quite loop

Your loop doesn't quite match, but it's really close, so good job. I hope you wanted your loop to be really annoying, because... it is! GJ 9/10

TheProudestMonkey responds:

haha i know it doesnt loop, i just found it on my computer from a long time ago.

Purrty good loop

Hey this isn't bad, but maybe you should add a background-a simple one (like bass). It sounded exactly like you put it-spooky happy dance. I would recommend this song to any artist who is doing a mad scientist scene, or a kid getting in trouble with a wide smile.

I'm giving you a 7/10, but if you put a decent bass line behind it, you may or may not get the 10. GJHF

Eyelids-pie responds:

Haha, thanks a bunch! I'll put more thought into bass next time.

Not long enough

Hey this is cracker jack material, but you should make it longer. if I make a spooky scene, I want it to be long... right? Also, if you do decide to make it longer, don't repeat what you've already done. The synthesizer was starting to really kick in there. If you could do more with some bass, and build suspense, you might get more hits.

Good title, ok suspense, timing is excellent. 7/10

Sounds Like Warcraft 2

I like this, sounds a lot like the game I used to play. Your music sounds like it's building suspense, but then it drops it. Try not to drop it back to 0. Hell, I like it.

Repetition

Watch out for the same key's when using a synthesizer. You don't want excessive repetition unless there is something revolving over that repetition. at about 2:20 and onward, you cover the repetition-this is what I mean. You've gotta do that through out the entire song, and then make it more complex. Also, I think that many songs like this one should have a different ending. I do not know if it was intentional to do make it fade. Remember to ALWAYS end on a C.

gj.

I agree with Venlar

This is a sensational song. It really touches your innards. Without looking at the flash to go with the piece of art, it is something special. This is the type of music that makes you think about yourself, your past and future. This is a song in which, when you listen to it, there is a deeper meaning behind it. This one make me feel like-that's just the way it is, and we're moving on. Come with us or stay behind.

The repetition of the main 3/4 through the song is very important. Without the repetition our feelings can be spread out more. Overall, crystal clear sounds, deep meaning, repetition (but not annoying like many songs), and a beautiful start. 10/10

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