Lord1Mauler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[LowBit]

hmm.

Would probably be good for a strategy/thinking game. Try to loop it better.

[Could I only say]

0 votes and at the bottom of the list? Darn

I often do what you do, go into a muse and play some music. I let my fingers do the talking. I like your work, but I didn't like being surprised by the drums at the end-doesn't seem to fit... What it does fit is the title. So good job on that. This is why I don't submit my audio-because I'm afraid it won't work-or because I only like to be the only one listening to it.

GJ

[Remnants -Incineration]

zZYawnZz : )

Very relaxing, I wouldn't make it a loop unless it was for the purpose of a game, but then again if it were for a game, use more than one song. This is relentlessly like slow breathing while you sleep. Do you know what I'm saying? I would recommend this to a parent trying to get their infants to go to sleep... literally. 10, 5, faves. gj.

Tysuru responds:

Truth be said, I've never pictured any of my songs to be lullabies UNTIl you said that.

It is more or so a "demo" in a sense I guess, to see if the rest of my team likes it.
But I will admit that it is also my seemingly growing inability to actually make a loop.

So if they do end up liking it you can bet that a longer version of it as a song format will be out.

But I'm really glad you are slowly put to sleep by it.
(haha)

[I Want Your Bike]

Not too crappy!

Lyrics are really really poor-I advise not repeating the same thing over 4 times-something that The Police do a lot. The lyrics don't really make sense to me, probably because I can't hear it over the drums and Sax. That's another thing. The drums/drummer doesn't seem to be in beat the whole way through... like he/she got lazy with it. Saxophone sounds fine. I want some more of the bass/guitar it sounded good in the end, why didn't I hear it in the mid? Learn what you can about recording because it sounded really shallow/from another room-it wasn't clear enough.

Overall, I really like your work, it needs a lot of touching up, but it could become on it's way to becoming something fun to listen to. BTW, you ain't getting my bike-it's a 28-speed, and probably too tall for you : )

5/10

ducksuck responds:

There was no sax that was all bass. It wasnt meant to have good quality it was just recorded in a garage with a cheap tape recorder when we played this song i had only played drums for a month. it is just a joke dude it's not a big deal that it sounds like shit

[Summer Days in F Major]

Beautiful

Crappy ending, staticky, not clear/loud enough to say the least/worst.

Catchy, relaxing, fun, enjoyable to say the most/best.

8/10 I hope the advice is CLEAR.

Please make this song more clear-I want to download it because it's really really good. Message me when you're confident to that point.

Pandaguru responds:

Hey thanks for the review and advice.

Yeah the recording quality is pretty crappy because I don't have a good microphone and I don't have a good keyboard either. So in an attempt to make it louder I crank up the volume on the keyboard but which than causes the microphone to lose some of the pitch and crackle. I am looking into maybe buying a midi cord and doing everything electronically.

Thanks again though and I will definitely notify you if I ever can get it fixed.

[Lion King - F-777 ReMiX]

okay

I felt like the Lion King Theme went away when you used the synthesizer... You made it EXTRA loud too. The Lion King Theme song makes a calm profound emotion in everyone of us. I feel like you destroyed the feeling with the synthesizer. I'm not saying it was bad, but maybe try a different instrument?

6/10

[Artistic Rendition of Insanity]

lol pokemon

Sounds like pokemon glitching up lol. Definitely artistic and definitely brings out the emotion of insanity. This is probably the type of music that goes through my head when I'm having serious lower back pain at my job.

GJ

[Mood Symphony Pt. 1 - Anger]

Needs... Lacks...

Your piece is real good, but it's lacking what it really needs-bass and percussion. Put a tuba, timpani, drums, and crash symbol in there and it should sound much more fired up. When I'm listening to this I hear a dull sense to it. I don't know how angry you get, but anger sounds more like it was in caps. Example: WHAT THE FUCK!?!?!?!?! Get it?
Nice try, needs a lot more work. Try adding sound FX as well, that should get ppl to listen to it. 4/10

[Happi/ Krazi Piano]

Needs Sound FX

I know I'm not supposed to agree, but I agree with Thrusthor. I would also like to say it sounds really corny and a lot like Guitar Hero World Tour-when making your own song. BTW, what's the recurring theme here? Please send bk a message. 2/10

Eternalqueen12 responds:

I'm not quite sure how to put it, but every song i hear that has a high score sounds like crazy noise to me...there might be one element that is different than the other one which i suppose is what makes it sound "unique" but everytime i click a song, i expect it to sound a certain way. like game music or something that's supposed to be a funny song or rap or something.

I can understand how you find it corny XD and that's fine, but i don't really do instrumentals, seeing as i sing and all. this was more like a test.

Thank you for the review!