Soar Away Bad ending, otherwise, awesome
I think the ending was bad because it didn't end on a stiff, solid note. It ended with a ring, and the ring never quite discontinued. GJ, I will consider it for my flash!
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78 w/ ResponsesVery peaceful but...
Take out that part where it sounds like you're hitting a small piece of metal. It doesn't sound like it's part of the song because it doesn't sound in rhythm/beat. Otherwise this is very well done!
Yep-not too shabby
Use smoother transitions, sounds like you're starting a new song at the 1 minute range. I would add more bass to it-sounds a bit too much in the high pitch. Definitely beyond the beat, and not too repetitive-which is good.
Way too repetitive, beat not steady...
This piece sounds like it was done in half an hour. Ya gotta put time into it like any other piece of work. I couldn't find a beat to your work-that's not good because it sounds like an amateur did it. For whatever program you are using, try putting on a "Metronome" to the speed you want. This will help you in the long run to keep your beat steady.
The whole thing is too repetitive. Try to introduce another instrument or add a solo somewhere in the middle of your work. Your intro and outro should sound alike. Right now it's beyond boring, and hard to listen to without muting it. BJ-Bad Job, try harder next time. 1/10
good voice, keep using it
This is good... Really good. Sound FX worx with your music, because it's scary. Your voice is clear, the recording is smooth-no crackling, my ears aren't bleeding, god.. this is just awesome. I'm adding this to my fav's.
I think you should stick with your voice because many audio's don't have a voice, and when they do, it sux. You got a good voice, don't give it up. I'm doing a flash right now I will consider this piece. 10/10 all my 5 belong to this piece!
Crosswinds responds:
thanks, dude! you have no idea how good that makes me feel right now!
Change the title, and add something more...
This has nothing to do with the Crucification of Jesus Christ. I hear no words that relate to it. The song seems really disappointing, like a big loop... but it's not. I don't know if you picked a title out of hat for this piece, but it just doesn't work. I could imagine it took you SOME time to create this lovely thing-a-ma-jig, but it really needs some spicing up. Add some words, add a solo of some sort, and fix the damn title. Only then will you get a 10/10.
TheAcidMaker responds:
Oh, that's just a random title.
Holy shizzle nit!
Hey this is pretty kick butt! The lyrics are freakin freaky, but I like it lol. This would be a great song for a fighting scene in anybody's flash. I would kick up the guitar solo at the end a little bit more, but otherwise, the beat is steady, the bass is there, and originality is a big plus.
Want the 10? scream some more-like you mean it. Maybe you already are, but I'm not convinced. Like when you do the chorus at the end of the lines you say "you." Instead of saying U like a proper english person, try to go outside the boundaries a lil bit. Ex: YOW!!!! The oo in you sounds kind of "nice." I think the genre you're performing in here is more "evil."
GJ. 9/10
Schleif responds:
haha, thanks man! my pronunsation can probably be blamed on my nativity. as a swede, i might not sound perfect. or rather, not appropriate. but i'll keep working on it for sure! thanks for the great review man!
Dandy.
I'm voting an 8 because I think it could use a tad more spice to it. Maybe some trumpets? The French horn is a good bass line. I like the medieval characteristic it carries-just as you said it does-kings or royalty. If you want the 10/10, add at least 2 more instruments.
GJ.
Lightningpichu responds:
Yea ok :P There are trumpets in this btw they just arent as important as the other imstruments.
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