Hmmm first few seconds were good. In the middle somewhere I lost my fear. Maybe more bass in your voice or something more dark sounding?
Hmmm first few seconds were good. In the middle somewhere I lost my fear. Maybe more bass in your voice or something more dark sounding?
It's perfect like it is.
Bravo! Bravo! I love the echoing in your voice sync-definitely depicts shadows moving around me. I like that the poem is short and sweet-I had to listen to it twice...and I want to listen to it again and again. Look for my next collage-yours will be in it!
I am very glad you enjoyed it :)
Be sure to PM me the outcome of your work. Ill be happy to check it out!
Very well done. Good voice. However, read it slower and more enthusiastic-you might wow people a little bit more!
I don't think it's supposed to be "Enthusiastic"
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Perfect minecraft trailer because of the metal clings in the beginning. I might use this for my game!
:D
thnx
Darn...
I have a few constructive criticisms myself on this one. First, the sub you made in the beginning and very end....needs to be cut out-it makes an awkward appearance. Secondly, I think that some bass horns would have given this song much more suspense and intensity. Thirdly, the drums were not loud enough...at all : / And as lannelllkj has put it, it got a little irritating just to hear the horns-that is agreed. It is a strong song and idea, but needs much attention and work...Then I can play it in my car on the way to work in a blizzard : )
Actually listening to it months after I made it I am realizing the exact same thing I will do a fix and re-post this.
thnx for the criticism
:D
You got my foot tapping!
I think my favorite part of this song was the flare of the trombone and/or tubas in my left speaker. This is a strong song, and I gave it a .058 boost : ) I hope it gets you somewhere! lol
Thank You :D
WEAK!!!!
really weak. Work on this one!
the redone ver. is almost complete
it sounds more like a trailer for a zombie movie now though lol
w00h00!!!
Just listened to your teaser trailer, and was hoping to find something more, and here it is! Ended a little too short : / as far as the song ending part. Might want to crop that out.
Thnx I kinda felt the felt the same way but
I said w/e...POST
lol
Absolutely Astonishing!
This is the first professional sounding ambient song I've heard on the whole list! Grats! 5/5 10/10 faves dl
I'm glad you like it, although I suppose everyone has their own opinion of what qualifies as 'professional'. I would definitely suggest listening to my album as well.
Its ok-not worthy of a 10 however...
Don't leave the audience off with 30 seconds of space. No one wants to edit the end of that space to use it in their flash movies or videos. Be pro, not lazy.
Yeah, that bit was added on when I exported it from FruityLoops. I've yet to figure out why it did that. I sure as hell didn't intentionally put it in. :/
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