ok..
lame ending, rest ok.
ok..
lame ending, rest ok.
Ur mum.
good voice, keep using it
This is good... Really good. Sound FX worx with your music, because it's scary. Your voice is clear, the recording is smooth-no crackling, my ears aren't bleeding, god.. this is just awesome. I'm adding this to my fav's.
I think you should stick with your voice because many audio's don't have a voice, and when they do, it sux. You got a good voice, don't give it up. I'm doing a flash right now I will consider this piece. 10/10 all my 5 belong to this piece!
thanks, dude! you have no idea how good that makes me feel right now!
Change the title, and add something more...
This has nothing to do with the Crucification of Jesus Christ. I hear no words that relate to it. The song seems really disappointing, like a big loop... but it's not. I don't know if you picked a title out of hat for this piece, but it just doesn't work. I could imagine it took you SOME time to create this lovely thing-a-ma-jig, but it really needs some spicing up. Add some words, add a solo of some sort, and fix the damn title. Only then will you get a 10/10.
Oh, that's just a random title.
Holy shizzle nit!
Hey this is pretty kick butt! The lyrics are freakin freaky, but I like it lol. This would be a great song for a fighting scene in anybody's flash. I would kick up the guitar solo at the end a little bit more, but otherwise, the beat is steady, the bass is there, and originality is a big plus.
Want the 10? scream some more-like you mean it. Maybe you already are, but I'm not convinced. Like when you do the chorus at the end of the lines you say "you." Instead of saying U like a proper english person, try to go outside the boundaries a lil bit. Ex: YOW!!!! The oo in you sounds kind of "nice." I think the genre you're performing in here is more "evil."
GJ. 9/10
haha, thanks man! my pronunsation can probably be blamed on my nativity. as a swede, i might not sound perfect. or rather, not appropriate. but i'll keep working on it for sure! thanks for the great review man!
Dandy.
I'm voting an 8 because I think it could use a tad more spice to it. Maybe some trumpets? The French horn is a good bass line. I like the medieval characteristic it carries-just as you said it does-kings or royalty. If you want the 10/10, add at least 2 more instruments.
GJ.
Yea ok :P There are trumpets in this btw they just arent as important as the other imstruments.
Doesn't quite loop
Your loop doesn't quite match, but it's really close, so good job. I hope you wanted your loop to be really annoying, because... it is! GJ 9/10
haha i know it doesnt loop, i just found it on my computer from a long time ago.
Purrty good loop
Hey this isn't bad, but maybe you should add a background-a simple one (like bass). It sounded exactly like you put it-spooky happy dance. I would recommend this song to any artist who is doing a mad scientist scene, or a kid getting in trouble with a wide smile.
I'm giving you a 7/10, but if you put a decent bass line behind it, you may or may not get the 10. GJHF
Haha, thanks a bunch! I'll put more thought into bass next time.
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