Lord1Mauler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gangsta's Paradise (Acapella)]

awesome.

should be longer, but this prolly took u a lil while to do... Awesome.. I think I'm gonna try this with my own voice lol... GJ 10 5

FolegAlmighty responds:

Do it, man! Let me know how it goes!

[CKC - World Today]

good

This is a good start to the "emotional background" of our world. I think your idea of taking audio from news channels and radio stations is a nice touch. Maybe if you made the audio from the people a tad louder I wouldn't have to scramble through the music to listen to it. Look at Metallica for an example. They could make the instruments louder, but then you wouldn't be able to hear the singer. In the band, "Rise Against" you can't hear the singer because their voices are meshed with the instruments.

Sorry it took me so long to review this, it's been a long week. 4/5, 8/10

CKC2009 responds:

ew.... rock lol na i have heard of this "Metallica" but never listen to them...

thanks i will turn up the volume and
if your wandering
Crosswinds is gona be done in a week with My song "listen" :P

so keep your eyes peeled... :)

[TranZformerz [deceptICON mix]]

klubba has a point dumass...

I have powerful speakers bro, and its on bass mode. Most bass songs work on my speakers,but the beginning of your song is a bit muffled and foggy. It would ROCK if it didn't garggle.

Overall your song is really really repetitive and boring. The only voice is in the beginning-I was hoping for some kind of fighting words like "AH" or "Take This" because then some one could make a cool fight scene from it. Way to NOT go. At least it has industrial sounds-5/10

LKBS responds:

I know GDMMT! ITS TRANSFORMERS I was goin for the concept. theys so powerful the distortion is the sound of it barely bein contained . lets see whatchu got goin on... no real audio work so wat I care? not at all. thanks for checkin out my song though hope you at least enjoy it. P.S. if music didn't repeat there would be no melody or rythem or anything just ... static? either way I still lov this song, I know where it needs improvement just need practice. don't we all? besides all... this is just a hobby for me. PCE!

[CKC - Someone You Lost]

This is really kick butt!

As soon as I heard the bass I thought-this would sound good in the car! I think the slow beat from the drums helps the fast piano become the title. After listening to the introduction and the the ending, I think that the ending should have an echo to the piano like it did in the beginning. The bass really backs up this awesome song (this is a good thing). A lot of people choose to add their bass far along their song-which is a mistake. Here, you have it throughout the majority of your song.

The ending landed smoothly, the transitions with the symbol & bass (ex:2:00) kept the song from being over repetitive, this is a good song for not having words because it gives the listener something else. He or she can put in the thoughts that they feel with your song. Very simple title that reflects the music. I think that this song is more love than hate.

Awesome dude, awesome. I am so a fan of CKC2009. 5, 10, faves. you should sell stuff-I might buy!

CKC2009 responds:

Yo thanks a lot bro hopfully *fingers crossed* il make it as quite a good figure in the hip hop world but i only start making music altogether only 3 months ago so woop woop ha ha

thanks man

[Rhadamanthine [WIP]]

The bass

Ok i think the bass needs to be there the whole time, or at least a couple of seconds after the beginning. The repetitiveness of the synthesizer could be a good thing if the far-away echo sounds like something solid. Personally, I think the drums should have a little bit more of a punch... a deeper pitch. At the end of your song I noticed a change in the bass-like a different pattern. Keep that going, or at least make the pattern closer to the middle. Remember-good songs have beginnings, middles, and ends. Please don't make an end that doesn't land on a C-that is very very important.

NessbeatsFox is right-not bad for a WIP.

JebusAndTheHolyYoses responds:

thanks!
yeah I agree, the bass could be in there earlier.

and about the song's end... this is just a preview, it doesnt really have an ending yet. But yeah, thanks!

thanks for all of your advice!

[Land Locked (Pulse Remix)]

Wow

This is a sad song, but with great honor and respect, I would have to say this is the best of the month. The lyrics equally cooperate with the beat, it's catchy and fun to listen to, it's not overly repetitive like so many songs I've listened to, and I LOVE IT.

You get the benefits-10, 5, faves, WOM (word of mouth). I'm glad to see someone put words/lyrics in their work and having it turn out perfect because that's what a song is.

merlin responds:

Thank you so much for your review! I put a lot of work into this song, and was keeping my eye on its score very closely. Yesterday when I went to work it had a 4.46, and was in the top 5 or so on the techno page, and when I came home, it was at a 4.18, and I was freaking out... then I saw it was on the front page, and nearly soiled myself! Your words are too kind. I listened to the other songs on the best of the week, and I think my song belongs right where it is, out of those 5 songs, right at the bottom, heh. I'm glad you liked the lyrics, too! I think out of everything I've written, these are my favorite. Even if they are a year and a half old!

[Para - Smog Step Sanctuar]

mmm that sounds gooooooooodddddd

This is fucking awesome. I'm not going to say, "you could have made it longer" cause this is poifect. I'm totally loving it-this is my 2nd time listening to it. You've got an interesting talent here-I haven't heard anything like it before. OO it's playing for a third time!!! This would be good in movies. I'm adding this to my faves. 10/10 5/5 GJ

Koriigahn responds:

Hehe, thankyou for reviewing man! :):)

[Newgrounds On Speed]

Great loop... but

it's not as smooth as other loops I've heard. It's kind of overly repetitive.

JohnnyFrizz responds:

Fair enough.

[unfolding truth]

I agree with the guy below me

but I think you should make it at least 2 minutes...

kasumikyo666 responds:

im making a longer version now :]

[Ocean Sun]

cool, but why?

Why put this unfinished version on NG then?

HarvestThrone responds:

Because a friend of mine wanted to check it out and she doesn't support file transfering features...